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                                                                  Nissan LEAF

                                       
      The name of this car is "Nissan LEAF" It is used to save energy.It look like Midsize car with five doors Hatch Baggins End cut five seats. Width 1770 mm, 4445 mm long and 1550 mm high. Use kind of fuel Electric –powered.  average speed of 140 kilometers per hour. This car Price 735,600  baht.  I am sure that the  Nissan LEAF   will be replaced the gasoline car in the next 3 years.

Reference
    This car uses Electric –powered  ( Yajima,2015 )

    Kazuo Y.(2015). Nissan LEAF :new Innovation that Excites . Retrieved  from

http://www.autospinn.com/2016/06/nissan-leaf-to-get-bigger-battery/

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          The name of this car is "Nissan LEAF" It is used to save energy.It look like Midsize car with five doors Hatch Baggins End cut five seats. Width 1770 mm, 4445 mm long and 1550 mm high. Use kind of fuel Electric –powered.  average speed of 140 kilometers per hour. This car Price 735,600  baht.  I am sure that the  Nissan LEAF   will be replaced the gasoline car in the next 3 years.

Reference

    Kazuo Y.(2015). Nissan LEAF :new Innovation that Excites . Retrieved  from

http://www.autospinn.com/2016/06/nissan-leaf-to-get-bigger-battery/

Outline

  - What is this car name?  

     Nissan LEAF

   -What does it look like? 

     Midsize car with five doors Hatch Baggins End cut five seats. 
Width 1770 mm, 4445 mm long and 1550 mm high

  -  What kind of fuel does it use? 

    Electric –powered         

   -  How many kilometers per hour?   

    Top speed of over 140 km / h.
      How much does it cost?   Price 735,600  baht

- What is the In-text citation's name and year of this writing?                                                    I am sure that the  Nissan LEAF   will be replaced the gasoline car in the next 3 years.

- What source in the reference list that the writer used?

    Kazuo Y. (2015). Nissan LEAF :new Innovation that Excites . . Retrieved  from

http://www.autospinn.com/2016/06/nissan-leaf-to-get-bigger-battery/

    

Second draft

Second draft
     
      

Now, Ratchanok  Intanon  is the greatest badminton. Her is white skin and Quite tall, Her is a long black hair. Her plays  badminton very well, Ratchanok  Intanon  won when

She is 17 years old, She is a champion Brad Minton third consecutive young women .In 2013, She get award  The tournament All England and Swiss Open. And now she

became a young female athlete badminton rank third in the world. I  like her because she 

is the youngest of the young athletes

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   Ratchanok  Intanon

Now, Ratchanok  Intanon  is the greatest badminton. Her is white skin and Quite tall, her is a long black hair. Her plays  badminton very well, Ratchanok  Intanon  won when

She 17 yers old, she is a champion Brad Minton third consecutive young women .In 2013, she get award  The tournament All England and Swiss Open. And now she

became a young female athlete badminton rank third in the world. I  like her because she 

is the youngest of the young athletes

Outline

What is his/her name?    Her name is Ratchanok     Intanon

What does he/she look like?  Her is white skin and Quite tall, her is a long black hair What kind of sports does he/she play?  Her plays  badminton very well

What has been his/her sport success?    when She 17 yers old, she is a champion Brad    Minton third consecutive young women .In 2013, she get award 

 The tournament All England and Swiss Open. 

Why do you like him/her?   Because she is the youngest of the young athletes and
 her diligent practice .